Vishal Sharma

Rookie - 184 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

I Lay Awake With You In Mind. - Poem by Vishal Sharma

I lay awake with you in mind.
I cannot clear my head.
Reflect on days we left behind as I lay here alone in bed.
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Comments about I Lay Awake With You In Mind. by Vishal Sharma

  • Bronze Star - 2,414 Points Kavya . (3/25/2013 1:34:00 AM)

    excellent write....especially the last line liked a lot! (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,358 Points Unwritten Soul (3/23/2013 5:15:00 AM)

    Finally PH let me commented and do a favor for your invitation...i like the write, it has a sense of sentimental and soul inside the lines..keep it up ok! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,753 Points Hazel Durham (3/23/2013 3:44:00 AM)

    A beautiful outpouring of love with such deep emotions expressed vividly!
    Excellent write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,242 Points Gajanan Mishra (3/23/2013 3:16:00 AM)

    I watch you grow Vishal, thanks. I like your writings. (Report) Reply








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