Vishal Sharma

Rookie - 175 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

I lay awake with you in mind.


I lay awake with you in mind.
I cannot clear my head.
Reflect on days we left behind as I lay here alone in bed.
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  • Freshman - 607 Points Kavya . (3/25/2013 1:34:00 AM)

    excellent write....especially the last line liked a lot! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,060 Points Unwritten Soul (3/23/2013 5:15:00 AM)

    Finally PH let me commented and do a favor for your invitation...i like the write, it has a sense of sentimental and soul inside the lines..keep it up ok! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,074 Points Hazel Durham (3/23/2013 3:44:00 AM)

    A beautiful outpouring of love with such deep emotions expressed vividly!
    Excellent write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,319 Points Gajanan Mishra (3/23/2013 3:16:00 AM)

    I watch you grow Vishal, thanks. I like your writings. (Report) Reply

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