Tan Pratonix

Rookie - 1 Points (Triolet, Mauritius)

I Lay On The Grass - Poem by Tan Pratonix

I lay on the grass beneath a tree,
Beneath a shady tree,
I lay on the grass in the noonday sun
With blue skies over me,
I lay on the grass and the warm green fields
Swayed like the waves of the sea.

I lay on the grass and watched the clouds
Grazing in the sky like sheep,
I lay on the grass and listened to
The little birds that cheep,
I lay on the grass and the gentle breeze
Lulled me into sleep.


Comments about I Lay On The Grass by Tan Pratonix

  • Rookie Philippa Lane (2/8/2006 3:30:00 AM)

    This is an innocent and open poem, quite simple which adds to its beauty. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Julia Klimenova (1/28/2006 12:08:00 PM)

    I most liked the 'grazing in the sky like sheep' line. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 26, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 28, 2006


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