Interesting to say the least. It seems to be missing something of importance to make it a great poem, but I enjoyed reading it. Sometimes the only thing that we can offer the world is what we learned from life. I would appreciate the poem more if it had some dark hints as to how you learned these things.
Many things you have learnt and a much more you have to learn yet...wise men always tell life is full of learning...but when then we will apply all these, life is one...is not it! Nice. Run long.