(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

What do you think this poem is about?

I leave it

I leave it to readers
Come out of grave and act like leaders
Not leaders of false promises
But ordinary man of less misses

What do we try at?
Why we are lazily sat?
Why does it go to words alone?
When so much water has already gone

Will we rise above level?
Confirm it first to go well
Not only story to tell
But success at length to dwell

It may find favor
Without relation to turn sour
As from sky the rain pours
Thus ends our venture with tour

But let us leave behind
Not long tail to find
Our misdeeds or untold story
That may speak nothing but only sorry

Submitted: Sunday, August 26, 2012


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2012 2:08:00 AM)

    good poem


    Marcus Page9 hours ago
    very thoughtful
    Comment +1
    awesome

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2012 2:07:00 AM)

    good poem


    Marcus Page9 hours ago
    very thoughtful
    Comment +1
    awesome

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/28/2012 2:07:00 AM)

    betty redd8 hours ago
    like this because it tells the truth of falling short in this life

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/26/2012 1:54:00 AM)

    I leave it to readers
    Come out of grave and act like leaders

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