I’ll Take All The Blame Poem by David Harris

I’ll Take All The Blame

Rating: 5.0


I don’t love you, but you love me
I’ll take you just the same
If anything goes wrong
I’ll take all the blame

I’ve known you for a long time
We’re just good friends
I’ll try to make you happy
Take you till the end

I’ll take you and love you
At least I’ll try
And we’ll find out
By and by

If anything goes wrong
Friend I hope we’ll remain
For if anything goes wrong
I’ll take all the blame

(Date written unknown)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 09 April 2007

Wow! ..so caring, but David, try not to be so hard on your-self, for in truth, none are flawless, we all make mistakes along the journey, the thing is to learn from them and keep going! Love duncan X

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Melvina Germain 04 March 2007

Take the blame, hmmm I don't know David. I think we should all share in the responsibility of not-so-good situations, share the blame--Yes. Obviously the person portrayed in this poem is a very nice person, sweet, loving, full of heart and truly great peace-maker. I still don't think they should take all the blame though. Excellent poem David.---Melvina---

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Pam Thomas 25 February 2007

I think you have captured in this poem David what a commitment is all about. Some relationships don't start with a fairy tale love they start with a simple commitment. I loved it. Another 10 from me. Hugs Pam

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Alison Smith 25 February 2007

Are you still waiting to take the blame... or has it always been your fault.... lol Alison

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 24 February 2007

This will be your good lady wife david...? 10

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