I Look..... Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Look.....

Rating: 4.9


Do I look stupid and fool?
Because all the time I remain cool,
Though I remained intelligent at school,
Never tried to make others fool,

People know I will not react?
Hesitate more and then act,
What is then matter of fact?

I never do the things wrong,
Always get together and remain among,
Mentally and emotionally very strong,
I know it is difficult and march long,

I don’t submit unreasonable demand,
Not subject anybody for unnecessary remand,
Listen to his views and patient hearing,
This brings closeness and nearing,

I act only when it is necessary,
Never feel tired and look so weary,
Still find no place and pushed to corner,
I know it will end for them sooner or later,

I shall make big headway,
All will ask and believe what I say,
I will be very sympathetic and kind,
Always at their service with approach kind,

I wish they should fast progress,
Confine to self and never transgress,
Tackle the problems and self address,
Never lament and express redress,

So I like people honest and straight,
Who stand for good and remain straight,
Never relent and face the fury,
Master of destiny and self a jury.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Vakil 04 August 2009

one should strive hard to improve it....10

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Kant Shri 04 August 2009

one canalways improve the look...10

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Vinod Karmakar 06 August 2009

u should improve upon dear....10

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Shilpa Maheswari 08 August 2009

one should try to improve upon.....10

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Santoksingh Jadeja 08 August 2009

one should look smart....10

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Louis Rams 04 November 2009

you are the master of your own faith, if you trust in GOD before it's too late. another ten

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Reshma Punjabi 11 September 2009

Do I look stupid and fool? Because all the time I remain cool, Though I remained intelligent at school, Never tried to make others fool, ..10

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Lalvani Rekha 16 August 2009

u should try to impress upon...10

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Raju Rajput 11 August 2009

should try to improve upon....10

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Jigisha Vyas 11 August 2009

one should improve and look impressive....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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