Mahfooz Ali

Rookie - 21 Points (28 October / Lucknow (U.P.) India)

I Lost A Friend - Poem by Mahfooz Ali

We were always together,
We swore we'd never part.
Where I was, there you were,
Best of friends from the start.
We both looked alike,
With hair and eyes of brown.
When you were happy, I smiled,
When I was upset you'd frown.
There was only you in my world,
And no one but me in yours.
We shared everything friends could share,
Our music, our clothes, our chores.
Then suddenly this friendship we knew,
Began to change too fast.
The magic of 'us' has dissappeared,
It was clear this wouldn't last.
We struggled and struggled to save it all,
We were put to the ultimate test.
And even though I lost a friend,
I somehow gained a me.


Comments about I Lost A Friend by Mahfooz Ali

  • Rookie Candice R. (5/16/2009 10:19:00 PM)

    Very good write.
    Almost made me cry.
    I lost a friend yesterday.
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  • Rookie - 0 Points Emily =) (2/12/2007 12:36:00 PM)

    that is so sad and so sweet! good read (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 12, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 13, 2011


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