(27 November 1967 / Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh)

What do you think this poem is about?

I lost myself

Sitting
On the roof
Of an old two-storied building
I lost myself
For some moments
As I was nowhere

My soul
While
Diving into its extremely big glow
Must
Lost
It
-Self!

Submitted: Thursday, June 14, 2012


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  • Captain Cur (6/24/2012 8:00:00 AM)

    Loved the way you managed this thought.
    Very well written and introspective.

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  • Douglas Scotney (6/16/2012 9:42:00 PM)

    Perhaps Must have
    Lost
    It
    -Self.
    Honest poems.

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  • Zoya Khalid (6/16/2012 6:58:00 AM)

    very short, yet expressive....

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  • Allan Macli Borges (6/16/2012 4:00:00 AM)

    nice work Asif Andalib, I can imagine the scene and feel the emotion that it brings to us. best regards.

    allan

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  • Unwritten Soul (6/15/2012 11:12:00 AM)

    Then find single storey building so it make less space for your soul moving..LOL Joking, Asif it was a good poem again...for many times you told us your pain here, and many of us here having that too...so i have nothing to cure the pain or bruises but i only can wish the best and pray for the goodness come and embrace for u as well for other who need it too...God please help us to find way home. :) _Unwritten Soul

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  • Darkangel Flyfree (6/14/2012 10:28:00 AM)

    nice poem, i feel like that half the time. Thanks for sharing.

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