I Lost Myself Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

I Lost Myself

Rating: 3.2


Sitting
On the roof
Of an old two-storied building
I lost myself
For some moments
As I was nowhere

My soul
While
Diving into its extremely big glow
Must
Lost
It
-Self!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darkangel Flyfree 14 June 2012

nice poem, i feel like that half the time. Thanks for sharing.

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Captain Cur 24 June 2012

Loved the way you managed this thought. Very well written and introspective.

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Douglas Scotney 16 June 2012

Perhaps Must have Lost It -Self. Honest poems.

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Zoya Khalid 16 June 2012

very short, yet expressive....

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Allan Macli Borges 16 June 2012

nice work Asif Andalib, I can imagine the scene and feel the emotion that it brings to us. best regards. allan

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Unwritten Soul 15 June 2012

Then find single storey building so it make less space for your soul moving..LOL Joking, Asif it was a good poem again...for many times you told us your pain here, and many of us here having that too...so i have nothing to cure the pain or bruises but i only can wish the best and pray for the goodness come and embrace for u as well for other who need it too...God please help us to find way home. :) _Unwritten Soul

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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