I Love The Smiling You Poem by Freespirit Juneja

I Love The Smiling You

Rating: 4.1


I love the smiling you

I love the smiling you
Oh I love the smiling you
Ruffling my senses
Unguarded me from fences
Life has nothing for me in lieu
When I see the smiling you
As I love the smiling you

Emotions are tantalizing
Feelings are fraternizing
Surprises are getting surprised
All these I never surmise
When I see the smiling you
As I love the smiling you

I love the smiling you
Oh I love the smiling you
My pains are getting vexed
Now they're really stressed
Failures are getting redressed
Seek nothing but only success
I feel like a man born anew
When I see the smiling you
Oh I love the smiling you

Freespirit Juneja

Monday, March 19, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 18 April 2012

I read this one before, that one was so good but after read a new version it be more soulful..it's like there is connection to say I love the smiling you to readers mind...Keep smiling..anyone should because it is the best remedy of any hardness...and keep heart feel peace everywhere whenever see smiling people around...we all love the smiling face_Unwritten Soul

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 22 April 2012

Another brilliant poem man, keep them coming...Siya_! !

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Shaurya Singh 22 April 2012

beautiful poem i loved it

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cynthia gomez 24 April 2012

it is a good poem. will read others of yours

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Whisperkwane Lamb 24 April 2012

All these I never surmise Swirling in the sounds Devised by the smiling you Oh I love the smiling you from the writer shared a a smile to another for all time a love maybe who knows that is what make the smile so wonderful it is unknown for what it is about to do to the one seeing...very good write...a new angle to the begining of a poosible love story..?

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 November 2022

A lovely poem dear poet Freespirit....A sweet poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 May 2016

I feel like a man born anew When I see the smiling you Oh I love the smiling you.....love, attraction, young age, infatuation............ smiling experience that remains portrayed in lovely words. thank you dear poet. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 December 2015

Smile! And let true love be seen on your face. Nice work.

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Rajendran Muthiah 07 June 2012

you feel reborn on seeing your smiling love.

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Anita Sehgal 04 June 2012

poem makes you smile! well done.

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