(October 6,1988 / Talisay City, Cebu)

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I Love this summer

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I just love this summer
especially we're together
We played in the sand
and suddenly you hold my hand

Though it's really been awhile
that we have not spent time together
that made me missed your smile
a smile that made my heart beats faster

We watched for the sun to set
while our hands both met
I was really trembling
and profusely sweating

But this was the best summer
that I've ever had
and I'll always treasure this forever
because you didn't made me feel bad

I hope that every summer
we'll always be together
and not just during summer
but i want to be forever

Cebu City, Philippines
May 7,2009

Submitted: Thursday, May 07, 2009
Edited: Friday, May 08, 2009


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  • Iron Panda 23™ (1/14/2010 10:01:00 AM)

    awwwsss....this is beautiful

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