I Love You Poem by Fatin Khalid

I Love You

Rating: 5.0


I won't talk about the clouds
Or the shining, yellow rays
I won't speak of the moon or the stars
I tried not to think of you today

Everytime I close my eyes
I see your face and it's killing me
That I can't be in your warm embrace
Because you're there, and I'm still here

Please look my way, but please don't look
For I can't breathe everytime you do
You take every beat of my heart
And it's only beating for you

Don't come to close
Don't go too far
Don't come so near
Just stay by my heart
Please take my hand
Please don't let go
Please say these words
For I truly love you so

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 May 2008

sweet words to say i love you i swear how to bear this feeling of despair

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Stephen Michael Carey 28 May 2008

I love it! The back-and-forth, how you want them near you but not near you at the same time, because you love them but they take your breath away and stop your heart in a way that scares you. Ugh. I soo love it. Hearts.

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