I Love You Poem by Amadai Nicolas

I Love You

Rating: 4.5


So many times i've told you
So many times i've reminded myself

It keeps beating in my heart
It keeps sounding in my mind

That phrase, so short
Yet so meaningful

If i keep saying it to you
It's beacause i fear

That my life does not express it enough
That your eyes do not see it clearly

I fear
That one day you may doubt

That yes 'i love you'
yes, you are the one
yes, yes and yes
You are my all

Monday, November 9, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 26 November 2015

A lovely depiction of voyage of bliss - a spiritual experience that is love, which affects all and sundry profoundly. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Amadai. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Hanna Maria 09 November 2015

great structure simple and short sometimes we can better convey our feelings with a small amount of words rather than a long paragraph. great job keep at it!

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Amadai Nicolas 09 November 2015

Thanks Hanna :)

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