I Love You, Goodbye.. (Very Emotional) Poem by Josh B.

I Love You, Goodbye.. (Very Emotional)

Rating: 5.0


When I wake I see there is a light placed over my head
I'm laying on some bed

as I lay in the bed I hear a familiar voice ask
'Is he dead? '

I now recall a flash of light and a bang.
Now I know that i must be in a hospital bed
almost dead.

I start to cry as I say 'I love you, goodbye.'

This has to be the worst day of my Life.

As I fade away
I think of the day we first met
no need to worry about me
i'll be going to a better place

with tears now flowing from my eyes
I kiss your face
as I say 'please dont cry, I love you...'

'Goodbye' the familiar voice adds, with a tear in their eye
I love you, please don't die'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
x-Pixie Pop-x 29 September 2006

This poem is really sweet..! Strange i know but still sweet...x i quite like it

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Josh B. 09 March 2022

Read what it takes

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hy josh! i love this poem! ! but i need your permission to write it down and show others but i wont take credit as i always write the name of the poet on the bottom of the page! well snd me a message with permission! love always, Pete Wentz' Babe

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Josh B. 09 March 2022

Do it to it spread my name around im working on gettin a book published

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Iskandr Kreepor 17 January 2007

Sadness....but I like sadness. I am on number 5/10. I look forward to reading your other 5 poems.

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Nagma 24 February 2019

Superb ,very emotional poem,I love it♥️♥️

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Dannie Urban 01 May 2011

Talent. True talent.

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Miranda Van Yperen 04 September 2009

wow that poem was writen right from your heart! ! ! great job :)

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Darkness Everywhere 31 May 2009

really lovely poem. i have some the simalur to it if you want to have a look. well done 10+++++++

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Very nice. It is very sad though.

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