I Love You. Not ≪/3 Poem by Freedom From Darkness

I Love You. Not ≪/3



You said those words
so easily.
You let me think
you cared.

Even miles and miles apart
you made me think
I was the only one.

Your smile,
Those three words,
Put butterflies
in my head.

Those butterflies
hide what you really are
and what you really do.

When you said those words
I did not doubht.

But what i didn't know was,
You said those words.
So easily.
To another girl.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alex Medina 04 May 2013

I like the last two stanzas, the way you broke up the structure of the sentence. It flowed well and conveyed the message in a powerful manner. Keep writing, and keep loving. ;)

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Neela Nath Das 04 May 2013

Very nice indeed.Loved.

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