I Love You, You Love Him Poem by Elias Barcelona
I Love You, You Love Him
You kiss me
I hold you
We lay together
You leave me
I miss you
You and him together
The pain i feel
So unreal
Why must i be a side show
The bread before the meal
I ask you
You tell me
You'll stay together
We'll stay together
You love him and me? ?
No, one is empty
One is not love
Both cant echo through etenity
Then who could it be
Is it me?
Is it you?
Us together?
You live with him
You run to me
Nights spent together
You run to him
You leave me
An hour is forever
Its over
I say choose
I wait pateincly
You say i lose
Why was i so easy
For you to bruise
You'll kiss me
I'll hold you
Never together
Ever again
You'll leave me
I'll miss you
You and him together
Eternal till the end
i am soo sorry...i have never felt this pain but i have seen many of my friends go through it...hang in there
this is great. it got me up in shock and amazement. anyway, the four words, you me, us and i. are carefully and nicely fitted in the poem. great set of rhythms and very apt title for a very realistic scenario
very well written and meaningful but simple enough language and style for everyone to understand nice!
that was some sick rhyming man. i like the 3 word lines making it an easy read but showing a lot of your character. well done :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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First off I love your name, it's a great poet name. Elias Barcelona, great ring to it! Second, great job on this one. I have only too recently experienced the same with a girl. It always seems great in the beginning...