I´m A Candle Poem by Maria Shipka

I´m A Candle

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I´m a candle
My inspiration you are,
I only do it
what you awoken in me....
I'm a candle
you are the candlewick....
The circumstances caused
that between you and me
was sparked the flame.
Only on you and me
depend
how long
and how intensively
will this flame to flame....


(c) shipka

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 25 June 2010

inspiration from the flame or lack of it... will decide how far how long nice menaingful lines cheers

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Allan O 31 October 2009

a candle burns for only a time, but the flame shall remain as mine. never a candle can dim ones place, when there is a purpose and a smile in the space. thanks sweet poem... :)

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Ency Bearis 30 October 2009

A good simile poem...short but meaningful....remarkable verses....10

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