I'M Just Like You When Blue Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

I'M Just Like You When Blue

Rating: 4.4


Without thinking, I can also turn and lash out
with my teeth sharp exposed, do you now, not get
this picture in full...right....now..i am just like you,
so low from hard up scenes, I wish..I were
miles apart, gone from my head, when i lay
on those sheets, do you think there of white
satin, on which I like, you do so crave, I'm just
like you, there filled so far high, to the ceiling
down to the floor of nothing but raw abrasive
denim, those rosy tears that run down from
the moon, are the blues, I have like you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 14 June 2009

A clever poem silent in the mind then wham it hits you with its cleverness, just like us all true blues +++10 regards uavaniceday

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Eyan Desir 12 June 2009

top marks good write

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Alexa Depaola 03 June 2009

this is pure excellence!

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Eyelizabeth Unknown 24 May 2009

breath-takingly beautiful *tear*

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Fiona Davidson 21 May 2009

Your poetry has such a poignant strand running through...absolutly beautiful...Fi 10+++

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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