I'M So Sorry Poem by Fadhy Mtanga

I'M So Sorry



If I didn't fulfilled my promise,
Because of my faults,
That I didn't take you there,
Where I had promise you one time,
Just if things went wrong,
And you feel that I'm responsible,
And you feel that I'm to be blamed,
I'm so sorry.

If things that went wrong,
Happened just because I made them,
That I was fooling you around,
To waste your time and hopes,
And you feel that I'm responsible,
And you feel that I'm to be blamed,
I'm so sorry.

If I didn't take reasonable efforts,
To help our love not to break,
And if I didn't advise you so many times,
What to do to save our love from breaking,
And you feel that I'm responsible,
And you feel that I'm to be blamed,
I'm so sorry.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daedalus Labyrinth 16 January 2009

Poetry is a great way to express our deepest emotions. You've done exactly that here, and you've done it beautifully. Well done.

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Joseph Poewhit 16 January 2009

Love is give and take

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Fadhy Mtanga

Fadhy Mtanga

Dar es Salaam, Tanzania
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