I'M Waiting (Cameo) Poem by lady grace

I'M Waiting (Cameo)

Rating: 5.0


waiting
i'm always waiting
the days and nights that you’re not here
i'm waiting
sixty seconds, sixty minutes
twenty four hours of daylight
you miss, ,


(this is for ian and me.....to carl harris, thank you again for coaching about cameo..thanks a lot..kissesssssss)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Kamran Haider 21 August 2009

love is more profound when the person u love is not around... that's the beauty of waiting n missing... good one....

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Eyan Desir 21 August 2009

hmmm, hmmmm very interesting piece good write

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Ency Bearis 21 August 2009

wonderful thoughts...intersting style...

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 21 August 2009

very well penned..............

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Indira Babbellapati 21 August 2009

life is a long waiting...

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rago rago 30 August 2009

simple and fantastic..............

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Marieta Maglas 26 August 2009

it is a really wonderful sad lyric poem................10+++++

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Yelena M. 24 August 2009

'sixty seconds, sixty minutes twenty four hours of daylight you miss..' a beautiful write on waiting...shame to me i never heard of cameo and am very interested in it..harmony in its construction..thanks for sharing. Yelena M.

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Lalitha iyer 24 August 2009

I am still waiting hoping he is alive somewhere sometimes when ages retreat may be I could see his face but death is nearing and my hairs are greying gracefully I admit I am losing ground yet I am waiting just only waiting for nothing else I could do but wait for him to take my limping hand and kiss upon it saying come on now die peacefully..............

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2009

sixty seconds, sixty minutes twenty four hours of daylight you miss, , ....there is great enjoyment in wait andwe understand the feelings only in that period. it takes us to lonely moments and self addressal but no anwer is found only desires burns fromwithin.....10 read mine new blood all over and simpe grace

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