I Made You Up Poem by Nicole Jaimie Carothers

I Made You Up

Rating: 4.5


You were everything I wanted
perfectly complete.

You were anything honest
anything unique.

Beautifully beautifully lovely.

Brilliantly brilliantly radiant.

Something I wasnt
Geniously my opposite.

Too bad
underneath the image
I hadnt realized...

I made you up.

I made you everything I wanted to be.

I made you exactly to fit me.

Beautifully beautifully ugly.

Brilliantly brilliantly dark.

You were everything I wanted
imperfectly complete.

You were brutally honest,
disgustingly unique...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 05 May 2014

Interesting poem Jamie

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 30 August 2006

a cruel reality depicted with no fail!

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