I Miss That Pretty Gift Poem by Amitava Sur

I Miss That Pretty Gift

Rating: 4.8


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Her deep and passionate kiss with love
Was exclusive and so enticing it was,
Filled my heart so greatly with joy-
With my beloved's warmest kiss!

I was awestruck with the glimpses of her smile
And mesmerized with her delightful charms.
Missing that priceless pretty gift,
I'm missing them all the way...


My sweet heart's two soft palms,
Caressing me with her tender touch,
I felt extremely blessed by her
With joy and endless thrill.

With her glittering eyes and smiling face
My beloved's those sweet words
Was so much pleasing to my ears -
As if a rhythmic symphony was playing near me.

Those whispering dialogues
With her aspirations and dreams,
Keeping me enthralled in those days -
Are still echoing around me.

My beloved's pleasing, sweet voice
Are humming as an ode till date,
As if a fairy was singing around
Being delighted with thrill.

That passionate kiss with tender touch
Those sweet words with soft voice...
Were showered on me in abundance
In those lovely days! !

I was so happy and joyous with you
And always remained immersed in you
Being dipped in your intense love
And all those dreams you had.

Bygone are those happy moments -
All seem to be like fairy dreams,
Missing that priceless pretty gift,
I'm missing them all the way...

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Amitava (15.02.2014) 6-00 pm

Monday, October 20, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 20 October 2014

sweet words soft voice, thanks.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 20 October 2014

Bitter and sweet feelings of love nicely expressed........very nice

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Valsa George 05 November 2014

I can guess how deep is your sense of loss! Yet you can be happy that there was not even a trace of sorrow or unpleasantness any time in your life with her! As long as you lived with her, you lived in joy and bliss! Now you have those sweet memories for company! A very sweet and deeply touching write!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 22 October 2014

That great gift fondly remembered in a melodious arrangement of words. Those memories let the living live with some meaning.

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 October 2014

Sweet memories, Heartfelt write. Each lines filled with love and happiness. So they are sweet in memories. Beautiful dedication to your love.... I was so happy and joyous with you And always remained immersed and dipped in your love. Loved reading it and thanks for sharing beautiful moments with us.

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Salini Nair 21 October 2014

Those whispering dialogues With so many dreams Are still echoing around me, Keeping me mesmerized all through day! ! ................... heart touching words....nice

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Roseann Shawiak 20 October 2014

A beautiful gift with such tender and bittersweet thoughts of your love together. Very heart-touching poem! Sadness, yet a joy over having had such a perfect love. Romance from yesterday, is like icing on today's memories, kept close to the heart. A perfect expression of your feelings for her, this is definitely a gift also to her memory. A memorable poem, Amitava. I give you a 10. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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