I Miss You Poem by Spirit Litter

I Miss You

Rating: 3.5


i miss you
if i write here, i cry
in my insides, i am blue
tears swim in my eyes
my words are often leading to sighs
my heart still thrives, with the rthyme of you
yes true, it be of blue, yet its living a life of loving you
the blue is only part, for other is about
this love why it holds no doubt, just feelings of might
feeling that flies higher than a sailing kite
which floats into the sky-bright
when it is blue means the rain (crying) is due
a rainbow will show, to lighten up the gray
sun will peek threw only to wipe away the clouds
than back to me you will come
no longer will i be sad
with longing you
just happy (glad) that we would be together again, and not a part
i miss you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 19 April 2008

love as longing true wish still seems to tie by the blue just as rainbow by the moon heart yet cries for the embrace...............love yet intense by remembering, yet luscious green, unique expression of love, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing

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~ Jon London ~ 01 May 2008

Spirit, your heart was definitely in this fine example of poetry, very believable...a great write all the best, stay strong Jon

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Karen Delta 27 April 2008

such a sad but lovely poem. loved it.

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Undead Perez 25 April 2008

i like that you really showed your feelings. I wonder, did this really happen 2 you?

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Hope Blankenship 25 April 2008

i like this poem it really says how bad you miss this person i like the way you worded it like only a true poet would thanks for reading my poems also

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Broken Peaces 23 April 2008

A sad and heartfelt poem Ihope your tears of sorrow soon turn to tears of joy 10 Chris

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