I Miss You Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

I Miss You

Rating: 4.6


For Jap & JL

I long for the golden sun on this winter day
I pause walking by the seaside, the tide is high
the humming birds from the nearby trees I can't find
And in my heart there sits a quiet pain
How I wish you're here, smoothing the ache away
holding me close and wiping my tears dry
I'm standing here alone as the waves whine
waiting for the bright sun to shine again
for the birds to sing once more in a lonely tree
and warm the freezing wind around me...


8th January 2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ted M 06 July 2009

Very interesting and romantic. You can take the reader away to that thoughts of yours.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 15 January 2009

holding me close and wiping my tears dry I'm standing here alone as the waves whine heart swaddles across the grin of green love yet silhouetted by breath of lone silence.., what a wonderfu piece of love loking to the blue sea as when waves whine....yet eloquently curved throug luscious glow across the passion, ingenious write by the lucidity, well penned,10++++++, thanks for sharing

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Michael Gale 13 January 2009

Mighty fine poem. Your poems are a pleasurable read. God bless all lonely lovers of the wintery nights, and poets too-MJG.

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Ency Bearis 13 January 2009

wonderful poem..nice imagery write a simile..10

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I love this poem the picture is so clear.. very nice KRISTA

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