I Miss You Poem by Luwi Habte

I Miss You



I remind the times we spent together
With the love of our heart and respect each other
I miss it, it is too late later
I want you to come back, I can`t wait for after

I hate me because am apart from you
There is nothing new about me, it became boring everything I do
I can`t sleep I can`t work miss you to hell
I wish to turn up the past to stay with you at all

I can`t think of something but how you are doing
How you are spenting a day? I am really wondering
Does it gives you a sence to survive alone?
Or you have a savior which takes care of you more?

You can`t get who loves you as same as mine
Who miss you, to be controlled her mind
Turn back look after me
Feed out my heart, help me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A T 11 July 2009

Very much enjoyed your poem... i kow what you mean when you cant help but wonder about that person... very good writing i like it alot

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Ershad Mazumder 28 May 2009

Dear Habte, it is more a reporting than a poem. Keep in your mind that poem is not prose. It is just like a painting. You must understand what colour means. Read poems of contemporary great poets. Also read my poems.

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Saadat Tahir 17 May 2009

very nice lines keep writing an sharing cheers

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Jonathan Ghirmay 24 March 2009

its so amaizig girl u become a good poeter from time to time and i want to tell u that its a nice poem that i have never read it before so keep it

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