I Miss You So......(Lover's Lilt) Poem by saadat tahir

I Miss You So......(Lover's Lilt)

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I haven’t seen you in so many days.
Oh please don’t say we part ways.

Want to feel an I miss you so much.
Eye to eye I ache your loving touch.

Just your thoughts elevate my being.
Days drift I become lost unseeing.

My racing heart I can barely control.
My love to me you the only console.

I would have you sit by my side.
The world an heavens so I’d ride.

Oh lord please let her feel the same.
Send again love from whence it came.

(Islamabad)
(May 06,2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fawzia Zie 06 May 2009

wonderful feeling! even though the pain is unbearable!

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Nasreen Dawood 06 May 2009

so pure is your love...what a beautiful poem...inshallah may your love return what you feel.

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Rehana Nazli 19 September 2009

I haven’t seen you in so many days. Oh please don’t say we part ways. Want to feel an I miss you so much. Eye to eye I ache your loving touch. Hey..thats what I call a romantic poem, sentimental and serene.

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Excellent rhyming …thanks Like a fresh air of hope to me.. Ten dr. sakti

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Dear Doctor, your heart beats seemed irregular at that time.wellbut yes wonderful feeling at that time.....10

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Aleksandra Lachut 29 May 2009

Very nice poem and it perfectly describes me and the feelings that I have for my best friend.

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Naidz Ladia 07 May 2009

rhyming words are nice to read....this is a nice expression on how you miss the one you loved..naizz

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