I Move Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Move

Rating: 5.0


I move around
As happiness is found
I have in you a good friend
Who will lead me to an end?

It fills void
Encourages me to avoid
With no more usefulness
Life is full of chase

I shall change
And manage
With rising star
Even if that is far

The shine and sun
Will stop my run
Raise hope
With resolve to walk on rope

The eyes may have new shine
With hope worldly and divine
I shall take deep and think fresh
I shall check again the same face

It will make
As to have taste of cake
That shall sweeten your mouth
You may prefer east, west north and south

You may prepare no more pyres
As heaven and hell are here
You may feel gentle touch
That shall make you not to think as such

You will dreamy night
I shall be there to delight
You shall have fresh start
Life is certainly human art

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 December 2013

I move around As happiness is found

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Gajanan Mishra 16 December 2013

manage with rising star, good thought, I like it sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 December 2013

Bill Hurley2 minutes ago very nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 December 2013

great Juan Chavez2 minutes ago nice word play and i liked the rhyme this is my type of poem Comment +1 good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

Lucette Bailliet and Rohani Daud like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

Re: I move (Score: 1) by Dagger666 on Tuesday, December 17,2013 (23: 34: 58) moving with emotion..rock on

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 December 2013

Re: I move (Score: 1) by misdgal on Tuesday, December 17,2013 (01: 27: 49) Extreme raw thought and lovely tension. I like!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 December 2013

Re: I move (Score: 1) by misdgal on Tuesday, December 17,2013 (01: 27: 49) Extreme raw thought and lovely tension. I like!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 December 2013

Good Poem Greg Rouse6 minutes ago this is a lot of metaphor in this one and it may cause you to think; the word choice is different and though I may not clearly see the meaning in each stanza I like the way it feels

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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