I Need Poem by Dickens Joseph Sawo

I Need

Rating: 5.0


1. I need to tell you a secret look at 5
2. The answer is loo at 11
3. Don`t get mad look at 15
4. Calm down don`t be mad look at 13
5. First look at 2
6. Don`t be angry look at 12
7. I just wanted to say I Love You
8. What i wanted to tell you the answer is on 14
9. Be patient look at 4
10. This is the last time am doing this look at 7
11. I hope you are not mad when i say look at 6
12. Sorry look at 8
13. Don`t get mad look at 10
14. I don`t know how to say this look at 3
15. You must really be mad look at 9

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 June 2011

Nice poem. Quite innovative. The poem is rich in imagery and style. I give it 8/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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