I Need A Sign To Know Poem by Bradley Lester

I Need A Sign To Know

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I need a sign to know
I need a hint or two
I need to know if there's a chance
That we can see this through

I want to be with her
I want to be the one
I want to make her feel so good
My warmth inside, the sun

I'm looking for that sign
Just something even small
So I can give a little more
And walk beside her tall

I'll reach and hold her hand
The softness deep inside
I'll gaze into her eyes
In me she can confide

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
HaZeM PaKKaR 07 August 2009

are you waiting for a sign? ! .. writing this poem is the greatest sign.. trust your emotions, they will never let you down..

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Jesse Soto 07 August 2009

Although I might say that this works better for the music scene. The poetry here is missing the heart. Speak to me why this sign will be good, how will it make you better? How will it make you feel? Poetry is about the raw emotion, let the emotions speak for themselves and you will have mastered this topic, guaranteed! This serves as a great template and I suggest you work on this more and I know this sign of yours will come. Good luck!

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Bradley Lester

Bradley Lester

Western Cape, Cape Town
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