Tiku akp


I Need My Freedom - Poem by Tiku akp

I need my freedom
As much as I need my bread
I need my thoughts to roam free
Even long after I am dead

I need my freedom
As much as I need the sun's ray
I need my mind without a chain
I can't wait to be free for some other day

I need my freedom
Would like to be as free as a brook
I need it in every breath I take
Not off and on as if in a fluke

I'm born free
I need my mind and heart to share
I need every one to be free
Before into the dark hole I retire


Comments about I Need My Freedom by Tiku akp

  • Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points Shahzia Batool (6/3/2012 1:33:00 AM)

    All true phrases, all effective centralised simile structure...simple n beautiful! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Celina Michelle Eisenhut (3/23/2012 4:46:00 PM)

    This poem is very touching and beautiful. Keep writing. :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 605 Points Rekha Mandagere (3/22/2012 1:00:00 AM)

    Freedom is as important as sunray to life.Nice comparison. I just loved your verse on freedom, we really need freedom for heart mind to be creative. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (3/21/2012 12:30:00 PM)

    we all need freedom... in our mind and heart... in our life. we should be free from all faces of the world.... good poem.............. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christina Phan (3/20/2012 11:21:00 AM)

    I like the way you describe and put your thought into this poem. It very wonderful and unique. Keep up the good work.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (3/20/2012 7:23:00 AM)

    Superb piece! I liked it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 17, 2012



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