I need my freedom
As much as I need my bread
I need my thoughts to roam free
Even long after I am dead
I need my freedom
As much as I need the sun's ray
I need my mind without a chain
I can't wait to be free for some other day
I need my freedom
Would like to be as free as a brook
I need it in every breath I take
Not off and on as if in a fluke
I'm born free
I need my mind and heart to share
I need every one to be free
Before into the dark hole I retire
All true phrases, all effective centralised simile structure...simple n beautiful! ! !
This poem is very touching and beautiful. Keep writing. :)
Freedom is as important as sunray to life.Nice comparison. I just loved your verse on freedom, we really need freedom for heart mind to be creative.
we all need freedom... in our mind and heart... in our life. we should be free from all faces of the world.... good poem..............
I like the way you describe and put your thought into this poem. It very wonderful and unique. Keep up the good work.10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Superb piece! I liked it.