I Never Loved U Poem by val legend

I Never Loved U

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he loved her
as the ocean loves the shore
to him, she was everything...
but to her, he was just a thing
when she have had her fill
like a sour milk
she tossed him out
'I never loved you', she said...
that day he died
for his heart turned cold
for he loved her too much
he could not hurt her...
filled with rage
driven by hate
vengeance his calling
he left, a man on a mission...
down the road he met her
she was so pretty
but love starved
'a perfect victim', he thought...
with nothing but time on his side
he gave her enough affection
till she fell in love with him
like lightning he struck
he took from her all she had
from her heart to her last breath...
with a smug smile
he pushed the cold steel of his blade
right through her heart
'I never loved you', he said
its nothing personal
you're just the first of many...
now he is back on the highway
his next victim is just down the road

by Val legend

Thursday, December 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death,hate,heartbreak,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 23 June 2017

as the ocean loves the shore but to her, he was just a thing she tossed him out 'I never loved you', she said , he pushed the cold steel of his blade, the next victim.. Wahat a terrible poem....... l ove its mysteries. complications, human reactions that leads to never ending hatred. all these points you have expressed very welll in this poem dear poet...... thank you for sharing. tony

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Titto Mutunguti 20 December 2015

beautiful poem...i love it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2015

Wonderfully expressed poem shared definitely. Fantastic sharing.10

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Manonton Dalan 10 December 2015

why you go on hurting when somebody hurts you it's not right tough it out ...very nice poem sir

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