I Offer Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Offer

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I offer prayers
For welfare
Of self and others
With happiness to offer

I feel my prayers are reaching
To an almighty and searching
A place for solace in distress
That brings cheers on face

I am not sure
What I get in return from prayers!
Yet it derives great power
And provides coolness like rainy showers

It helps to all those
Who are aligned with me in chase?
Willing or unwillingly
But I wish them happiness really

Yes I give place them all
In my prayers and wish no fall
Let them remain fully blessed
As I have been graced

With each second
I wish to grow with strong bond
To be with them in distress
And side them to face

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

I offer prayers For welfare

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

Like prayers join as incense smoke to the throne of God. Steven Avolio10 minutes ago This poem expresses the desire to pray. It is in ore DNA to pray and worship. Well done. Comment 0

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

Nice Thomas Cipolletti 11 minutes ago I enjoyed it. spiritually philanthropic

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

Great Poem Megan Davis12 minutes ago Its nice to see that others do this too Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

nice Jennifer Ridge13 minutes ago nice Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 February 2014

Good feelings expressed Milton Paul11 minutes ago The poem is written in noble thought. Technically - the last line is a bit jarring. The length of the lines could have been more uniform.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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