I Peep On You Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof

I Peep On You

Rating: 3.9


I peep on you
When you say
You don’t love me
I saw your rose pulps

I peep on you
I saw you rested your love
On the bowl

I peep on you
I saw your barbaric tits waving
Water dripping from there
Right to your squirrel

I peep on you
I saw your squirrel
Wet but breathing
Seems like in hunger
For partner

I peep on you
When you say
You don’t love me
I saw your beautiful face
As horny
As your squirrel

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Arquavia Pryor 07 January 2009

lol yea its gud i lyke it bt it tells me dat u is probably a freak but i hope u not lyke dat but kool poem once again

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~ Jon London ~ 09 January 2009

The way you explore the boundries bro, never fails to amaze....you are a true poet of genius qualities.....and it's always a pleasure to read your work. Keep bouncing them out bro....you're a first class writer, of the highest form. Thanks for this.....Your brother Jon

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Lal Hauzel 10 January 2009

Good...Better still if u can let the words (or the poem as a whole) rhyme. Keep it up!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 11 January 2009

interesting piece.....the body expresses more than words-10

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sumaira .....ir 11 January 2009

U have a great sence of judgement than: -) ... nice and beautiful words...

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Ms Presumptuous 22 December 2019

Well she too peeped on you!

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Raymichelle Springer 25 January 2009

This one was good.i have one question though what were you thinking when u wrote this. You have me curious about what you think about when you write your poems Sulaiman......

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Cassie Wheathers 23 January 2009

wow. i love it...but im suprised the site didnt remove it, they can be sensitive sometimes.

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Rayjean Carter 19 January 2009

this poem is...interesting...i get the feeling of 'desire to know wat you don't' from this poem....good imagination

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Vijay Gupta 18 January 2009

good imagination i like it.

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