ramesh rai

Gold Star - 13,404 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

I Relax - Poem by ramesh rai

I relax
when you come forward
my all actions are for you.

When I see you
like a young rose
I feel relax
when you come forward
because of your eyes
eager to see my happiness
because of your lips
eager to make me a kiss
because of your youth
regardless flowing to touch my soul
I feel relax
when you are before me.


Comments about I Relax by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 28,641 Points Akhtar Jawad (5/28/2014 10:21:00 AM)

    A lovely expression of love, a beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,173 Points Hazel Durham (5/5/2014 5:12:00 AM)

    Your deep love that sweeps you into a sweet and relaxed state of mind, with superb lines that paint a scene of sheer bliss! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,962 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (5/3/2014 7:08:00 AM)

    Love's depth is beautifully expressed in the poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 30, 2014



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