Asif Baloch

Rookie (06-06-1978 / karachi)

I Saw An Angel - Poem by Asif Baloch

A mother wearing dark
Black cloth
Waiting, weeping and searching
For her child
Gathering rose petals from
Divested ground
I saw an angel who spread
All around

Pity and sorrow written allover
Their face
Limbed, paralyzed and destroyed
Forfeit by human race
But still they smile with
Playful eyes
I saw an angel who
Forgot to fly

Sitting on the ground with
Worn out cloths
Playing with toys thou made
Of shells and stones
Sitting in a car of
Imaginary ride
I saw an angel playing
Seek and hide

Hunger and poverty
As fate destined
Desperate need for just
Single bite
Standing by the window of
Shimmering lights
I saw an angel who
Ran of fright

The greed for more power
And black gold
Knowing its not rite
But they hide in their pride
They are human but no
Humanity left inside
I saw an angel who falls
Every moment and
Weep with painful cry


Comments about I Saw An Angel by Asif Baloch

  • Rookie Shiza Khan (10/25/2008 6:19:00 AM)

    great one.. well expressed (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie C T Heart (10/23/2008 10:14:00 AM)

    great angel... poetically expressed well. a 10. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,675 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (10/19/2008 8:09:00 AM)

    Angels are always with us and we see them in the great and small.Beautiful.A ten (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (10/18/2008 9:19:00 AM)

    I love your angel. This is a poem for mankind.
    Lovely work.
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Gargi Saha (10/18/2008 5:35:00 AM)

    A very meaningful &suggestive poem. Well done u get 10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (10/16/2008 10:26:00 AM)

    In Heaven, we are told, that the angels of little children always behold
    the Face of God. Written from the depths of your compassionate heart.
    Ten for you.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (10/15/2008 11:10:00 PM)

    nice
    lots of depth in this
    poem 10+
    love anjali (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emo Seb (10/15/2008 4:31:00 PM)

    deep. i love it.
    seb (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dr.Wardha Jawdat (10/15/2008 5:30:00 AM)

    we are indeed all angels till some vice grips us and then mutilates our innocence into something demoniac....all angels falling hiding fleeing....very nice thought inspiring write aijaz....you are blossoming! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Seema Aarella (10/15/2008 2:06:00 AM)

    Touching....! angels on earth in human disguise but living the same cursed lives...u have great talent and a soft core that pines and melts! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Evaughn Gray (10/14/2008 11:18:00 PM)

    that's so sad and heartbreaking... for me it's crying like you had black tears running down your cheeks.. heartbreaking piece..~Love Hazel (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 321 Points Seema Chowdhury (10/14/2008 9:01:00 PM)

    another wonderful composition. selection of words are excellent and words are thought provoking. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (10/14/2008 10:49:00 AM)

    I too see an angel of grace in these lines (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (10/14/2008 8:43:00 AM)

    I believe by reading more top notch poetry would definitely strengthen your writing.all the best to you in your future writes. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 411 Points Ency Bearis (10/14/2008 8:01:00 AM)

    a great write..nice theme...good verses...

    Ency Bearis (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (10/14/2008 7:51:00 AM)

    ahh! ! this is very lovely..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 112 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (10/14/2008 7:42:00 AM)

    Very good subject. The refrain is apt. Last stanza is very good. Please try to be brief, Ershad Mazumdar often advises me so. If time permits read my old poem MY SWEAT and MY MOMENTS. Similar theme.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (10/12/2008 9:04:00 PM)

    i saw an angel too, he wrote this. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie C T Heart (10/12/2008 4:52:00 AM)

    Explicitly penned out well about poverty, focused more on little children...a ten. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, May 3, 2010


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