I Saw You Poem by Naveed Akram

I Saw You



The days I saw you my life was concluded,
You bedazzled me afterwards with your leering look;
It reminded me of an individual who was bolstered by excellence,
He was with this likeness, and he was with this appearance.
The glove fits, the hands are squashed by it,
As your appearance is sufficient, and I am forever in love.
That man is not here, but there,
He is not positive of his life as much as you,
He is gaining my admiration, but you are more.
Fortune bombards me now, more than bullets and stones,
The distractions are upon me now, just now.
The memory of you glistens like a simple stone of excellence,
I am dreary now, just sleepy, and my dreams are alive,
There is a morning in which I have met you,
And tomorrow will be an excellent day for us.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kafil Uddin Raihan 04 July 2009

Very nice, excellent expression sir.

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Lacie Wasserman 04 July 2009

:) very good i like how you put it all together

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Naveed Akram

Naveed Akram

London, England
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