R. K. Hart

Rookie - 43 Points (Australia)

I Spoke - Poem by R. K. Hart

I spoke to the stream about the soft blue of your eyes,
After many a try to copy she failed and cried.
I told the harvest about the colour of your golden hair,
It tried to mimic a beauty beyond compare.

I told the hills the shape of your figure,
A great jealousy I did trigger.
I mentioned to the birds the sound of our voice in song,
They tried to sing as you do til they were horse.

I mentioned your smile to a golden sun,
He put in a good effort but failed by a great sum.
I spoke to the clouds pure and white of your charity,
They tried to love as you do without parity.


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R. K. Hart 4/5/2013

Comments about I Spoke by R. K. Hart

  • Rookie - 10 Points Alice -praises-''yhvh'' (6/27/2013 7:38:00 PM)

    A description of pure beauty. Who your writing about must be that. Lovely poem, thank you for sharing it. Alice (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Allen Steble (5/17/2013 10:13:00 PM)

    Excellent poem R.K. thnx for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,112 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/3/2013 9:30:00 PM)

    good efforts towards purity. I like it. thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 3, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 5, 2013


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