Treasure Island

Mahfooz Ali

(28 October / Lucknow (U.P.) India)

I still need a mother


I need a mother who would love me
I need a mother who would take care of me
I need a mother who would understand me
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  • Roxanne Robles (11/30/2009 6:17:00 AM)

    i like it you know y cuz when i read this poem its like its saying my feeling thats what i want and still need cuz she was never there for me so i still need a mother to show me the good way and wats bad cuz now im 18 years old and i still don't have a mother she keep doing what she dose best make me feel like shit and nuhappy and when i do see her all i feel is pain and the pain hurts so bad all i can do is cry and all she dose is look at me and let me hurt on my own so thats y like your poem thats what i want even if its one day at least so thank you and you showed me or you wight donw for people like me and in your poem you tell me that there is still hope i just have to keep trying.lots of love sadgirl602 (Report) Reply

  • Maliha Mirza (4/4/2008 3:43:00 AM)

    as i read your poem tears came out of my eyes.if you need anything from me so you are most welcome to say. (Report) Reply

  • Mz.Honesty Only (1/14/2008 10:28:00 PM)

    As i read your poem tears came to my eyes. I feel the same way. My mother been around me my whole life, but she was'nt never a mother. I was raised by my great-grandmother. As i got older i decided to get to know her. I think i wasnt ready because all the times i needed her she was'nt there, so it made it hard for us to bond. She came to late im grown now.I found a mother in someone else. BUT i still need a mother. I dont know what to do. I hate her but love her too. I will never let her know.I want us to be close, but im not cause she will never cause no more pain. (Report) Reply

  • Naphtal Hlubi (12/7/2007 8:08:00 AM)

    Reading this poem has touched me in a way I never knew something else can touch me after the death of my mother 3 weeks ago, she died at a time when I really needed someone to cry on and make me feel loved, I miss her so much, may her soul rest in peace.
    Even though I need her we must, all of us who have lost mothers and loved ones, that the people that are still left behind make life worth living after suffering such a terrible loss, KEEP STRONG AND GOD BLESS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Stephanie Mcgrath (7/5/2007 12:36:00 PM)

    This poem is full of pain and need it is a lovely poem i hope you find a person to
    forfil all your needs

    good luck

    STEF XXXXX :) (Report) Reply

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