I Surrender My Lifetime To You Poem by Pablo E Martinez

I Surrender My Lifetime To You



I want to believe one thing
that if you look
past the flicker of flames
venture beyond
the warmth of a glow
into the embers of my soul
you feel as I feel
an impalpable fervor
as if nothing else exists
only the need to
surrender
as if to give up in despair
for there is no other love
none beyond yours
such dulcet surrender

I surrender my lifetime


To you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wendy Bureau 09 March 2009

The giving of one's whole self unto another.. such devotion 'a lifetime' of love.. is forever and one day.. A beautifully romantic piece here Pablo.. Well done! Wendy

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Dark Gurl 55 17 January 2009

awesome..! ! ! everythin that iz written iz sooooooo right.. it's a fact.. lol

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