I Take Relief Of You Being Here Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

I Take Relief Of You Being Here



I take relief of you being here
you're my light no matter where
without hatred and hesitation
I'll run to wish-granting dream
become lightened by the white eyes
the waves washed away your sad story
even if the world turns betray the dove's prayers
I shall polish to shine the innocent chances
anyway I can still tighten this loose stanza

(dedicated to a great poet, Mr.Amiri Baraka)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 18 September 2009

this is so nice..i guess, he/she will be happy for this tribute...cheers..

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Catrina Heart 18 September 2009

wonderful dedication and fabulous words written....great write!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 18 September 2009

The presence of loved one certainly gives relief as narrated in this poem.

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Omar Ibrahim 18 September 2009

metaphors made the poem very delectable for the readers to read......well done ahmad...10

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Juan Carlos Abeti 18 September 2009

weel done as ausual, is a pleasure to read your poems...

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Noel Horlanda 22 September 2009

yeah, sometimes we need aspirin or any pain killer for a confused mind. Well done...cheers

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Indira Babbellapati 20 September 2009

very few can make a dedication as this....

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Louis Rams 19 September 2009

when you are inspired, it sets your heart on fire. good write and dedication

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Christina Phan 18 September 2009

i really enjoy tht u write poems for others amazing job 10+ kept it up

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Ravi A 18 September 2009

I really appreciate your heart for others.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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