I Think Poem by Vishal Sharma

I Think



Sometimes I lie awake at night
And think of the battles I've tried to
fight
I think of how no matter where I go
I find the ground always empty of
sacred, white snow
I think of the tears that have
threatened to fall
But instead spend days trying to stall
I think of how life tries to change
But only succeeds in being more
derrange
I think of how I spend hours reading
and leaving my thoughts
When in reality, one could go crazy in
that very spot
Then, last of all, I think of when I think
Because that's when my thoughts go
crazy in one little blink

Tuesday, May 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Sharma 06 May 2014

From : To : Date Time : Subject Cleveland Gibson (FARINGDON United Kingdom; Male; 69) Vizard Dhawan 5/6/2014 4: 46: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) I think The content of the poem is good and the last line well constructed with meaning. Other lines tended to be a little too long and not so sharp. However, well done for posting your poem

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