I Think It's Me Poem by Steven Robinson

I Think It's Me



Is it a dream or reality, do we fade or stay in focus?
We think we are real but who really knows the inside of us.
You have substance; I can feel and hear you speak.
I turn my back. Are you still there? Do you really exist?

Am I my mind or is my mind a stranger or an usurper of my body?
Who's in control? Me or the entity which is my thoughts.
If it is me then I have the power to control what goes on in here.
Surely there must be light switch, so I can see who's here.

Is it a crime to challenge ones mind, to not accept what is normal?
How do I know it's really me in here or is it just a day dream?
Do I exist or am I just an echo of something that is far beyond my intellect?

I can only speak about what I know, I think it's me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sourav Rc 29 March 2007

Thoughtful poem indeed... You've written it very well...

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Brian Dorn 21 March 2007

I think it's a well thought out poem, Steven... you certainly had ME thinking. Good write! ! Brian

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Terrance Woolridge 21 March 2007

I like this one Steve It's a hot write

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David Taylor 21 March 2007

You cant be what you can see, turn the light up!

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