I Think Of You Poem by Ashleigh R. Gardner

I Think Of You

Rating: 4.5


as the rain patters
the glass shatters
i think of you

cracks cover walls
and i start to fall
i still think of you

the sky burns
the world doesn't turn
i think of you

my arm is in pain
a scream i can't make
i still think of you

had enough, want more
brains cover the floor
but i'm still thinking of you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 21 November 2014

A lovely romantic poem, well articulated and penned with intensity. It's very nice, you captured the love in the inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Jahrae Patterson 11 June 2011

Ashes is this a cutting? If so its pretty abstract...artistic in Poetics...

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That was really deep and really emotional. It flowed really well too. I like it. Nice write!

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