I Too Dance In Rain Poem by kishore rao rao

I Too Dance In Rain



yearning of parched earth
melts the heart of heavens
rain falls.
fragrance rises from the soaked earth
and greenery lies for miles.
intoxicated by an unknown bliss
peacocks dance in delight.
a varied world of creatures come to life
and with the unruly wind and under the noisy clouds
i too dance in the rain!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Steve Meador 17 January 2013

I think you could remove the first two lines and your poem would be stronger.

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