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Some Girl

(May 05)

I Tried


it's been a long time
but i let you in
you took my hand
and the story begins

its been too long
a road not traveled
but i gave my trust
and soon it unraveled

the laughter it left
as soon as it began
i didn't know what to do
i still had your hand

i wanted your heart
it was a shot in the dark
it was a long time
to try a walk in the park

all good things must end
i tried though
i am lost
where does my heart go

Submitted: Thursday, August 26, 2010
Edited: Monday, September 30, 2013

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