I Tumble, Tumble On The Steps… Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

I Tumble, Tumble On The Steps…



I tumble, tumble on the steps;
The never opened doors…
Is your heart made of stone walls?
That doesn’t have some gorse

I fumble, fumble for my words;
The never tried out speech…
Is my tongue made of soft nerves?
That doesn’t have strong reach

I jumble, jumble with my thoughts;
The never ripened fruits…
Do my feels bitter seek sweetness?
That never knew love treat

I grumble, grumble on my thirsts;
The never fulfilled needs…
Is your heart unwilling to share?
Those pretty memories

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deependra Kumar Jha 23 September 2009

poem with a great flow. liked the rhythm. simple but heart touching

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 23 September 2009

a very soft and lyrical poem.... just loved to glide through. soothing composition. thank you sir.

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I agree with Sarvesh. This is a lyrical poem with a wonderful flow to it. The questions are well done and it is soft and beautiful. 10 love Karin

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Marieta Maglas 23 September 2009

Excellent lyric metaphorical poem, thank you for sharing..........10++++++++++

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Eyan Desir 23 September 2009

Good write.........................................................10s

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Raj Arumugam 29 September 2009

A lovely poem, playful and yet serious, Kesav... P.S. Here are a few lines in spontaneous response: our poems here dear Kesav are our whispers that we each share....

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Nalini Hebbar 28 September 2009

well structured...the anguish well expressed...great read

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 27 September 2009

A very cute poem; rhymes and rrythm is pleasing to read. I enjoyed it much...a 10

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Al Ramos 27 September 2009

I like the approach and path you took with this poem. My kind of stuff.

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Vidi Writes 27 September 2009

Ample and ample For, Stone walls to hear Humble and humble Are, Soft nerved tongue Simple and simple To - Seek for sweetness Crumble and crumble That -Unwilling Heart Dear poet, just the effect of this great write of yours. Wonderful wonderful read. Thank you so much.

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