Sadvansha Munshi

Rookie - 70 Points (24th March'99 / Kanpur)

I, Unleal? - Poem by Sadvansha Munshi

Is it up to me?
Why do feelings change?
I just want to be free,
Is it out of my range?

Am I being a criminal,
For feeling this way?
We were so official
But now for us I don't have anything to say

I, Unleal?
I am just being truthful.
There is a truth which I want to reveal,
I'm sorry I was not faithful..

I followed my heart,
Then why is it aching with guilt? ..
What I wanted was to be apart,
Then what is this strange feeling which is built?

I am across the river of drama,
Still I am a little wet with it's water?
Both of us has this trauma,
Need a recovery light to scatter....

I, Unleal?
I am just being truthful.
There is a truth which I want to reveal,
I'm sorry I was not faithful..


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Comments about I, Unleal? by Sadvansha Munshi

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (3/14/2014 8:58:00 AM)

    Never heard about unleal... now i too know what it means... nice write... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 70 Points Sadvansha Munshi (2/26/2014 3:34:00 PM)

    thankyou....! ! i just keep searching for some unique tittles for my poems :) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,540 Points Donnie Wolff (2/26/2014 10:37:00 AM)

    I learned something new today, unleal, I like it. As far as your writing, excellent. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Sadvansha Munshi (2/25/2014 3:39:00 AM)

    Unleal is an obscure word. It Means someone who is not honest or faithful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Sadvansha Munshi (2/23/2014 12:23:00 PM)

    Thankyou.....! ! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 524 Points Vizard Dhawan (2/23/2014 10:15:00 AM)

    The poem starts with a strong impact and gradually shines over the edge show a bit your maturity..! ! ! ! !

    Great stuff......! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 17, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, February 17, 2014


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