I Wanna Be Poem by ayam Rose Estelle

I Wanna Be

Rating: 4.8


I am who I am,
That is the truth.
But I am so many things.
My skin tone says I'm white.
My blood says I'm mixed.
My eyes say I'm a mystery.
My brain says I'm different.
My friends say I'm wonderful.
My enemies say their jealous.
My family says I'm odd.
My heart says I'm caring.
I say I'm me.
Is there no one else like me?
I am one of a kind, proud to say, yet sad to say.
I want so many to love me for me, but how will I fit in?
I am my own category.
I am me.
I am myself.
I am I.
I am ayam.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leila Mass 18 June 2010

Again, really good :)

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Nice free verse. I like your theme. Can you develop the comparitive listing further? Best regards, NCK

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Jonathan Strahan 08 June 2010

nice. cool how you ended with a play on your name.

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