I Wanna Be With You Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s
I Wanna Be With You
I want you
I want to walk with you
I want to talk
I want to talk to you
My heart wants
My heart wants your heart.
Will you walk
Will you walk with me
Will you talk
Will you talk to me
Your heart wants
Your heart wants my heart.
When all is set
Why you wanna leave
My lady you are mine
My dear am always yours.
Quite simplistic form and brave to use such long repetition. Again a piece leaving the reader wanting more expression.
my lady you are mine, my dear am always yours brilliant 10
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 3:03:47 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Well a good logic of writing this poem you adopted and seems fine also... but there should be some modification and editing so make ait a bit long, so that a complete sense of this poem could come ouside as apparantly as crystal and it will add to your poetic talent. oterwise it is upto mark.