I Want To Be Your Dream-Boy Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

I Want To Be Your Dream-Boy

Rating: 4.5


I want to be your dream-boy, my jaan
You can fill my life with joy, my jaan

I don't want to live like this, my jaan
Now you are the one I miss, my jaan

As if you are my full moon, my jaan
You are like Almighty's boon, my jaan

I love you right from the start, my jaan
I want to live in your heart, my jaan

I want to keep you happy, my jaan
Without you I am floppy, my jaan

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameera Sameer 05 June 2012

that was good... keep it up...9/10

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Adela Myers 14 June 2012

I love it! its amazing i think your a really good writter :) KEEP IT UP! ! !

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Ohood Al.shabibi 07 June 2012

nice keep it up! ! strong feelings

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Nana Kwame Nketsiah 06 June 2012

Great poem, nice rythmm. Could u consider reading my poemMY TEARS FLOW, BUT I SHOVE IT OFF

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Autumn Winds 05 June 2012

I like this poem, I think it's cute. I thinks it's just the right size and the rhyming is good.

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Sarah Windley 05 June 2012

it was cool, i like how it rhymed

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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