Abdul Wahab


>≫≫I Want To Die - Poem by Abdul Wahab

Heavenly cursed and heavily sinned I
No more i like to add them, so, I want to die
And I want to become a holy ghost
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Comments about >≫≫I Want To Die by Abdul Wahab

  • Veteran Poet - 1,455 Points Seema Chowdhury (7/1/2015 3:12:00 PM)

    A poignant and an expressive write. hope you find happiness in your life. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,705 Points Abdulrazak Aralimatti (4/13/2015 3:05:00 AM)

    Thoughts of death wander in one's mind.A good description of thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,658 Points Kelly Kurt (4/7/2015 8:01:00 PM)

    Written by a true poet. Thank you, Abdul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,939 Points Soulful Heart (9/14/2014 5:50:00 AM)

    shades of emily dickinson here......yes it wud b great to knw if we were cherished by our loved ones.......after death (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,451 Points Amitava Sur (9/7/2014 8:39:00 PM)

    It is a good emotional penning of knowing the value by ending oneself? Then does not prove a hypocrite society who so long did not value a life till the end and at least shedding tears to recognize? ? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 110 Points Luana Del Lobo (7/13/2014 1:38:00 PM)

    Interesting perspective of something that sometimes it's very hard to describe since we only can see one side of the coin...
    Well written! :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,859 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (7/5/2014 10:22:00 AM)

    death description is good but death is sad. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 406 Points Richard Blay (3/30/2014 4:55:00 PM)

    it's funny and lovely and deadly. good work Abdul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 45 Points Mary Amrutha (3/8/2014 7:34:00 AM)

    I don't in what context you wrote this.. the poem is good actually awesome but the concept is scary (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (12/6/2013 11:50:00 AM)

    Well crafted, Dark


    Blanca Prior598 days ago
    Given the reality of the times this is a bit depressing, however I feel it brings light to the fact that individuals that commit suicide aren't aware of how much love and support they have because everyone waits until that person is dead to express their true emotions. Although very dark it calls to a positive realization... that you don't know what you have until you lose it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (12/6/2013 11:49:00 AM)

    well wriiten


    Andrew Hozempa598 days ago
    this poem is well writen and I find I feel a heavy heart with reading it, but still feel a smile as you can sense his feelings in the words (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (12/6/2013 11:48:00 AM)

    I love this!


    Regenna Hairston-Grier598 days ago
    This poem reminds me of my childhood in a segregated south, and the very day the carrier brought the news that my fathers oldest Son was killed in Vietnam.... Very well express! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (12/6/2013 11:47:00 AM)

    intense


    Dara Bruce598 days ago
    its almost as if you wrote this from beyond the grave, i can tell you do not fear death but welcom ite (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (12/6/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    Great


    Marwand Bahand595 days ago
    A five star poetry writer. A heart touching poem which feeds your soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emily Taylor (11/5/2013 11:45:00 PM)

    yeah the whole huge space than death death death thing at the end is a bit much (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yenifer Mendoza (10/15/2013 2:54:00 PM)

    This poem is very deep and i indeed like it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (7/16/2013 4:56:00 AM)

    thank you Queeny Gona for your comment (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (7/14/2013 1:46:00 AM)

    thank you Heather Burns for your comment (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (7/5/2013 9:40:00 AM)

    death is an extension of life. here on earth we just start our journey, but after death we continue on to the end. I believe in life after death. a wise and lovely poem we are fulfilling our mission in life. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 937 Points Queeny Gona (7/24/2012 8:05:00 AM)

    Voted 10+++++ Sir, I hardly seen anybody defaming a person after his/her death. And coming to family, one can know how much he/ she means to them! (Report) Reply










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